Thursday, October 29, 2009

What are the important steps in an introduction


I think what is important about an introduction it's that they are telling you how the story is going to be about and how the problem of the story is going to affect (he or she).An introduction can be in different ways of starting it of.They could like,tell you,"there was once a girl or boy called.....''then you could get an idea of what the story is going to be about if it's going to be sad,boring,or interesting.That could get you the attention of the story when you are reading the story with full attention.I think what the main thing of the introduction of the story,is that they give you like ideas and like animating you to read that story that they tell you that the story is going to be cool,by that I mean that it's going to be really interesting and a adventure like you are imagining the story in your head,and you are getting the whole point of the story,and you are like "wow!"This story was really exciting.That's what I think the steps should be when writing an introduction by yourself.

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Living a drug free life


There was a girl named Andy (in a movie)she really drinked to much alcohol and she really was really scared of her next door neighbor,because her neighbor always banged the door of hers and she didn't taked it serious about it and then one day,she heard the bangs again that the neighbor had caused to hear the bangs really hard.She really thought that her neighbor looked really suspicious when she really banged the door of hers.Although she didn't stop drinking,and that caused her to really throw up all the time,but she really didn't care 0f it too much and that really caused her to really throw up too much and most of the time she would really get diarea and those chemicals that are in that beer really made her sick and she really got headaches,and alot of stomachaches.Well since she didn't really taked it serious,she had lived with her next door neighbor for six whole years and she said that she didn't really care of what happens to her all she wants is to drink until she is dead.That really cause her too much to get use to the alcohol or beer and when she goes to clubs the first thing that she does is to get a drink from a cafe and she drinks it,almost the whole thing and the thing that surprises me is that she is a girl and girl can't really support the chemicals that are in there (beer,alcohol)that really causes your body to be really sick and be very ill.It makes me feel very sad because people shouldn't act that way they should act like a really grown-up and what are their ages.I think that if we stop drugs,it will make the whole world be very clean and a good thing about it.I think that drugs are bad and we could all make a difference.

Friday, October 23, 2009

Honesty

I really think that honesty is important because it's like respecting other people and the persons that are with you will be very happy ,comfortable,honest,and be respected by you that you made that choice.A good example will be:if for example I'm with a friend that really is shy.Then if I come to (her or he)and then bully her I'm not respecting them and that would hurt their feelings and make them really really cry,but if I'm showing them with alot of respect and honesty,they will become your friends and they will believe you at all times and you won't be all that alone,than you used to be.Another thing would be,to never lie to your friends or parents,or anywhere that you are with you never must lie to other people,and if you succeed to never lie you would consider yourself,a very honest,respectful,and not liar person.For example,if my friend is very honest to me and that good person with me,and sometime I lie to her,and then she would cry because she has never lie to me and that relationship of friends will break apart,and she won't talk to me for the rest o0f the school year,but if I am that honest with her,she will talk to me for the rest of the life,even if we are in different schools,I will always be there for her and be there too.I think to me honesty is very important to me ,and to other people.

Wednesday, October 21, 2009

The best advice

The best advice I have heard is that my mom once told me," To never give up no matter what you still believe in yourself,and to never give up."I really liked that advice because if you don't give up then you'll succeed the school no matter where you are at,you don't have to give up and not to fail your mom on what she told you and you'll get better at stuff and be a good person like others have believed in the future.That did help me alot in school,like right now I'm not giving up because I'm typing and I'm not complaining or looking into another tabs,I'm really focused on what I'm doing,and I'm really succeeding the school because I get good grades like other students that have gotten in the future like in high school for example.I really like giving that advice to other students that really need help on not giving up.they really need to learn to not give up on their dreams,or different kinds of things that they would like for those things to really happen in their future or in a million years.All it takes is that you need to believe in yourself and that it's nor really hard on doing those things,just follow your mom's advice,and you'll succeed anywhere t don't matter what people say and it doesn't matter how hard it takes,you are still believing in yourself and you'll get yourself be a really good person like your mom told you,"Never give up,you just have to believe in yourself."

Friday, October 16, 2009

My Bio Poem

ANA
I'm funny,good,and little.
I'm daughter of Carina Martinez.
I'm related to my brother,mom,and grandmother.
I feel happy for myself.
I need alot of love from my family.
In my mind I wonder of my mom because she's at work.
I fear of fire.
I like to sit in the grass,(but in Mexico).
I believe in god and in my dreams.
My dream is to become a publisher.
OROZCO

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

What I would like is to tell people to stop drinking ,smoking everything that has to do with drugs.I would also like to see our community very clean so it like when like new neighbors come they would see our community full of sparkle and to not have our community dirty like junk food all over the place.It will also be good to the world because it's for our environment to us, the animals,and plants.It will be good if we do that in our community.
I think it's important because if we don't take care of this environment,we will die everything will be all rotten and be really dirty.An example will be:when we go out and eat and there's no trash can,what will we do?Well we are not going to throw it away just in the street,we are going to throw them in the trash can to save our world.